The leaves make a lot of sense, they FEEL like the leaves you are responding to...but the flowers don't yet. In class you seemed???..not so happy with the flowers, I thought they were ok, but now I see what you were responding to...they are more "fluffy" or "soft" than the drawing. So, consider them more like a soft pattern NOT LINES! Try blurring your eyes a bit and look at the flowers as light soft fading shapes occasionally coming to a sharp LITTLE dark shape...try and area and see if it helps? Bring it in and I will help you work on it! Be well Tom
The leaves make a lot of sense, they FEEL like the leaves you are responding to...but the flowers don't yet. In class you seemed???..not so happy with the flowers, I thought they were ok, but now I see what you were responding to...they are more "fluffy" or "soft" than the drawing. So, consider them more like a soft pattern NOT LINES! Try blurring your eyes a bit and look at the flowers as light soft fading shapes occasionally coming to a sharp LITTLE dark shape...try and area and see if it helps? Bring it in and I will help you work on it!
ReplyDeleteBe well Tom