One big thing: these are about TRANSFORMATION! So, how are they transformed? As drawings I mean?
I feel like these drawings have to go through SO MUCH MORE! Consider painting WHITE gouache over the WHOLE piece, and then redraw one of your women.
On another, try building one woman on top of another, building, and building.....
GO SEE THE DeKooning show at MOMA! So important to you!
And lastly, they feel more like dolls than real women? Is this important? What do you want, this matters and I will help you get that. How do you want us to think about these people who are transformed? AND WHEN (show me) were they BAD, OUTCAST, etc...
One big thing: these are about TRANSFORMATION! So, how are they transformed? As drawings I mean?
ReplyDeleteI feel like these drawings have to go through SO MUCH MORE! Consider painting WHITE gouache over the WHOLE piece, and then redraw one of your women.
On another, try building one woman on top of another, building, and building.....
GO SEE THE DeKooning show at MOMA! So important to you!
And lastly, they feel more like dolls than real women? Is this important? What do you want, this matters and I will help you get that. How do you want us to think about these people who are transformed? AND WHEN (show me) were they BAD, OUTCAST, etc...
Be well Tom