Anna, you speak about a dark side of our souls, you need to show this in the small thumbnail book. Use BLACK and WHITE to show how the story appears in simple dark and light shapes. There is a TEARING apart, a SPLIT, and then a possibility of getting together again..how do you show this VISUALLY.
I think you should have 2 more sketches to try out other ways of showing the WHOLE TEN pages. Consider SPACE more! RIght now the space is pretty flat? Create one with GREAT DEPTH at times, that allows more room to get lost. Look at PERSIAN miniatures to understand fairy tale space as opposed to REAL space. Create one the the 10 page sketches from images of REAL spaces!!!!
Anna, you speak about a dark side of our souls, you need to show this in the small thumbnail book. Use BLACK and WHITE to show how the story appears in simple dark and light shapes. There is a TEARING apart, a SPLIT, and then a possibility of getting together again..how do you show this VISUALLY.
ReplyDeleteI think you should have 2 more sketches to try out other ways of showing the WHOLE TEN pages. Consider SPACE more! RIght now the space is pretty flat? Create one with GREAT DEPTH at times, that allows more room to get lost. Look at PERSIAN miniatures to understand fairy tale space as opposed to REAL space. Create one the the 10 page sketches from images of REAL spaces!!!!
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